Using "between" in combination with the word "to" creates an awkward and illogical phrase. Here is an example of this goof (as it appeared in an article in The Birmingham News on August 14):
At the same time, it is estimated that electricity use will increase 29 percent between 2006 to 2030....
Events happen "between" one time AND another time. Or, they happen "from" one time "to" another time. The above sentence should read as follows:
At the same time, it is estimated that electricity use will increase 29 percent between 2006 and 2030 (or: from 2006 to 2030).
Once you make a habit of checking this one, the logic will be clear, and your writing will also be clearer.
Showing posts with label time expressions. Show all posts
Showing posts with label time expressions. Show all posts
Monday, August 18, 2008
Sunday, August 3, 2008
Time Expressions Should Read Smoothly
When you write the times for an event, think about the logic of what you are expressing. Recently, I received an invitation to a book release party, and the time frame was expressed as follows:
...on Saturday, beginning at 4 p.m. until 6 p.m. (sounds as if the BEGINNING is from 4 until 6)
I also see times expressed this way:
...on Saturday, between 4 p.m. until 6 p.m.
If you say "beginning at" or "between," you CANNOT continue with "until." The wording does not make sense. Here are some correct suggestions for expressing time frames:
...on Saturday, from 4 p.m. until 6 p.m.
...on Saturday, between 4 p.m. and 6 p.m.
I hope you are able to read this entry at some point between now and the next time I post to this site.
...on Saturday, beginning at 4 p.m. until 6 p.m. (sounds as if the BEGINNING is from 4 until 6)
I also see times expressed this way:
...on Saturday, between 4 p.m. until 6 p.m.
If you say "beginning at" or "between," you CANNOT continue with "until." The wording does not make sense. Here are some correct suggestions for expressing time frames:
...on Saturday, from 4 p.m. until 6 p.m.
...on Saturday, between 4 p.m. and 6 p.m.
I hope you are able to read this entry at some point between now and the next time I post to this site.
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