I read an interesting article this week about how churches are using Twitter and other social media networks to appeal to young people. Good idea, perhaps.
The following sentence in the article had a problem--it used a semicolon where a comma should have been:
At Christ Tabernacle Church in Queens; the Rev. Adam Durso and his brother Chris, the youth director, keep in contact with their flock, sometimes hourly, on a half-dozen social media sites.
A semicolon should only be used to separate one clause from another (or items in a series from each other). In this sentence, the first six words are an introductory PHRASE, so they should be set off from the main sentence with a COMMA, not a SEMICOLON.
At Christ Tabernacle Church in Queens, the Rev. Adam Durso and his brother Chris, the youth director, keep in contact with their flock, sometimes hourly, on a half-dozen social media sites.
Even if you Twitter, keep those semicolons for special occasions!
Wednesday, July 8, 2009
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